Daniel and I have recently finished our first draft of our research project. In order to make revisions, we brought our hard copy of the project to class on Thursday along with a print out of the assignment sheet. After receiving feedback from Professor Mangini our paper will be complete. We hope that our project has significant impact on not only teenage girls, but women as a whole. The points that we focus on are extremely important when involving toxic behavior in young women. We want to see change in the future when it comes to social media degrading women and making them feel less beautiful. Our goal for this paper was truely to make meaning and show how women are worth more than what is portrayed through media.
We also reviewed our classmates prefaces, this helped because having another set of eyes looking at your work can help find mistakes you overlooked. Another very important thing Daniel and I did this week for our project was re-evaluate our sources and make sure they were credible sources, if they were not then a lot of our argument would be false or unbelievable.
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